30 July 2016

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kick ball /
yellow spins /
to apogee /

- #haiku #senryu #micropoetry #3lines #6words #vss

6 comments:

  1. I really like the idea of the suburban football to a sun spinning in space.Perhaps another word rather than "apogee"(?)-such an arcane word-( I had to look it up).

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    1. Apogee is the correct word for the moment I witnessed. It's the tiny bit of science nerd In me.

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  2. Actually, it was a yellow ball kicked under a roof at night: no Sun involved. You see what the reader can bring to the piece?

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  3. yeees...
    My previous comments about other work, related to your narrative arc over years, with many recurring themes!

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