Thanks Devika, but no, I can't agree, I've decided that this is a failed experiment that has escaped into the wild. The words don't meet the potential of the image.
They can't all be good but the tre-ordinaire do help the others look good.
Perfect words for Valentine's day, yet the barbeb wire is larger and disguised in a nondescript colour as if it didn't matter at all this spooks still a fan :)
lost / in lace / and hair #haiku #haiga
Fantastic, Comrade :)
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devika
Thanks Devika, but no, I can't agree, I've decided that this is a failed experiment that has escaped into the wild. The words don't meet the potential of the image.
ReplyDeleteThey can't all be good but the tre-ordinaire do help the others look good.
Perfect words for Valentine's day, yet the barbeb wire is larger and disguised in a nondescript colour as if it didn't matter at all
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still a fan :)
As so often, we find a dark side.
ReplyDeleteThe barbred wire will re-emerge next month in another haiga.