26 October 2013

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back row middle seat /
all eyes /
on her voice /
- #haiku #senryu #twoem #poem
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2 comments:

  1. jem11/6/13, 8:44 PM

    Great stuff - that shift in line three - capturing just how it feels sometimes.

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  2. comrade harps11/6/13, 10:09 PM

    Thank you. I've found that cinemas are a good place for inspiration - either from the viewers or the movie.

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