02 June 2010

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her baby's memorial - / she cries / into the deep fryer #haiku

4 comments:

  1. I can't bear to even read it...you make it so raw, as is...

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  2. What I like about this one is the collision between the emotion of deepest loss and the supermarket banality of the modern domestic hostess/godess deep frying party food.

    Still more to come on this observation. I think you'll really take to the last one.

    Thanks L.

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  3. actually I understood it two ways,
    the first, the worse, incineration

    the second, the mundane, but just as bad, cooking

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  4. I hadn't thought of it the cremation way.

    Apparently there was a little urn in the room.

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