very good - the colour, the shape, the words - so simple it makes me laugh
I couldn't resist it when mrs harps'"cherry ripe" tongue tasted exactly like "cherry ripe"!Thanks for laughing.
I like your haiku very much!Years ago I wrote:ripe berriesthe taste on his tongueand in another version: of his tongue
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very good - the colour, the shape, the words - so simple it makes me laugh
ReplyDeleteI couldn't resist it when mrs harps'"cherry ripe" tongue tasted exactly like "cherry ripe"!
ReplyDeleteThanks for laughing.
I like your haiku very much!
ReplyDeleteYears ago I wrote:
ripe berries
the taste
on his tongue
and in another version: of his tongue