21 March 2009

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the family next door, /
quieter /
since he left / #haiku
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2 comments:

  1. bluetoque3/22/09, 8:53 AM

    This has a sad, forelorn feel to it. I wonder if it is the end of a relationship or a son moving out and into the world. Nicely done.

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  2. comrade harps3/23/09, 3:56 PM

    It was the end of a relationship - a lot less stress in their home when the father left.

    Thanks for the nice words.

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