Very nice. The last two lines are striking.
fine haku!It's straght and easy!I feel good.Thank you, I enjoyed.sakuo.
Nice haiku!It is light tempo and ryzumical.I enjoyed.Thank you a lot.sakuo.
it's a pleasure
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Very nice. The last two lines are striking.
ReplyDeletefine haku!
ReplyDeleteIt's straght and easy!
I feel good.
Thank you, I enjoyed.
sakuo.
Nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteIt is light tempo and ryzumical.
I enjoyed.
Thank you a lot.
sakuo.
it's a pleasure
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